Dear Sir/Madam
Thank you very much for making time from busy to read my letter.
When you open this page, you have opened the gate leading to success for me. Thank you very much for giving me a chance when I am going to start a new lifetime journey. If I could be under your direction and with your advice, I would make a grateful acknowledgement for you.
My name is xxx, graduated from xxx University xxx College with the degree of Communication & network technic major in (June或July) XXXX. In the years of being a academician,I thought for life, and took larger than myself, being grown up.
I joined the XXXX Co., Ltd.milk products section, being a staff of sales department. I learned a lot of merchandise's knowledge in more than on years of work. At the same time, I intensively and continuously studied the retailing knowledge, enlarged my thinking, inspired the potential and adjusted to a the environment, with comprehensive knowledge, to maximize my life value.
Finally I gained the excellent staff award in the end of XXXX. Since that, I was appointed as the director assistant of Meat Dept., in XX,XXXX. I felt my way in the new position , to be responsible for my work; I was energic in creation and surmounted the personalist the parochial self-interest to maximize the whole interest; In the teams, I learned that all should be relative to the company's cores and targets, with mutual credits, coordinating with each other, to break the limit of organization structure and maximize the department's efficiency.
What happened yesterday has become a history. A glorious future needs to be realized by hardheaded and remorseless working from now on. I has great confidence that every man have his gift. I am ordinary, but not a mediocrity. Though I may not be the top one among those candidates, but I, still believe, would do better!
Please give me a chance, you will be satisfied for my work.(建議盡職盡責(zé)改為其他積極的話語，畢竟盡職并不能被主考官看重)
Yours sincerely
Self-seller :YJBYS