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Dear Admissions Committee:
I am pleased to have this opportunity to recommend one of my capable students at the ABC University, Mr. Hung-Doe Doe, to your university‘s master degree program in computer science for entering class fall 1996. Through my extensive observation of him in both academic and extracurricular fields, I have come to the conclusion that Mr. Doe possesses a number of valuable qualifications that will make him an outstanding member of his graduate class.
I have had the pleasure of knowing Mr. Doe when he was under my instruction in the course of Electrical Engineering during the academic year of 1993. While attending this requirement course, Mr. Doe has left me with the impression as a bright and hard-working student who is highly motivated in his coursework. His academic integrity can be reflected by the fact that he ranked in the top 10% in the class.
Unlike most of his peers, who gained knowledge merely from school lecturing, Mr. Doe has spent a great amount of effort and time on reading advanced articles and textbooks and therefore has developed a firm grasp of this subject. I am of the opinion that my class has provided Mr. Doe with a solid basic background in electronics and circuits analysis, which is valuable to his academic pursuit in computer science.
An open-minded individual who never let go any learning opportunity and is always willing to share with people his own opinions and ideas, Mr. Doe, often came to me discussing various questions and problems he encountered during his studies. I was pleased to learn of his strong interest in electronic related subjects and the most up-to-date advancement in this field. His diligence and commitment to coursework has left a deep impression on me.
I have, without any doubt, come to consider him to be a highly promising student. With the intelligence and persistence that Mr. Doe has displayed, he will have no difficulty in succeeding in any academic environment and continue to perform outstandingly in your graduate school.
In general, I consider Mr. Doe a highly promising applicant to the master degree program in his proposed field. I have the least reservation on his potential to succeed in his future educational as well as professional pursuits. I give him my highest recommendation.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration. Should you wish to discuss anything pertaining to his application, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Best regards
求職信的結尾用語，可以參考下列句子：
A：(1)軟弱、羞怯的： If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you. 讀完此信后若您認為我還可以，我愿意和你談一談。
(2)改寫后(較佳)： If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you, so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
B:(1)懷疑，不妥、不安全的： If youre interested, let me know immediately, as Im sure and interview will convince you Im the man for the job. 如果貴公司有興趣，請與我聯系，我認為與您面談后可以使您相信，我可以勝任這份工作。
(2)改寫后： May I have an interview? You can reach me by telephone at Beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening. 我們可以面談嗎?可在每天上午七至九點，下午五點半至九點與我電話聯系,號碼：123456。
C：陳腐的句子： Hoping you will give me an interview, I am……(我希望與您面談) Anticipating a favorable decision, I wait your……(等候您的佳音) Trusting your reply will be satisfactory, I remain(靜候滿意的答復)
D：哀求式的句子，不夠完整(漏掉面談時間)： Wont you please give me the chance to interview your? I can be reached by calling Beijing 12345678.請給我一個面試機會，聯系電話12345678.
改寫后： May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone is Beijing 12345678. You can reach me between nine and five oclock during the day. 能不能與您面談以便進一步商討?我的電話是12345678。我從上午九點到下午五點都比較方便。
E：太過自信的句子： I am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements Between two and four every afternoon except Tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 12345678. 我深信面談可以證實我的話。您可在每天下午二至四點(星期二例外)打電話12345678通知我。
F：較具體有效的句子。 May I have an interview? My residence telephone is (010) 12345678. You reach me by calling that number until June 30. After July 2, my address will be XXXX, XXXX Street, XXXX District. 能否給我一個面試機會?我的住宅電話為12345678。六月三十日以前我都在此處，七月二日以后，我的新址為xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx。