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2016商務英語初級report寫作范例

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2016商務英語初級report寫作范例

　　Assessment of Suitability for Home-based Working

　　Introduction

　　The purpose of this report is to assess the suitability of my position as Resource Planning Manager for home-based working.

　　Findings

　　My working pattern and that of my colleagues vary from week to week. During certain periods a large proportion of my time is spent doing fieldwork. This is followed by office-based work collating and recording the data collected. Once the results have been recorded, I proofread the colour copies of all reports and maps.

　　As regards communication with colleagues, department meetings are held once a fortnight. At all other times, the individual members of the team communicate either face-to-face or by phone, depending on their location. Apart from official meetings, the same results can be achieved whether I am in the office or working elsewhere.

　　Conclusion

　　It is clear that I would be able to undertake the same duties while working from home for a large proportion of my time. Clearly, some days would be spent in the office for face-to-face communication with colleagues. It would also be necessary to use the technical facilities of the office at times. However, in order to be able to work effectively from home, I would need to be provided with a networked computer and printer.

　　Recommendations

　　I would suggest that I should be given the necessary equipment to work partially from home for a trial period. After this time, further consultation should take place in order to reassess the situation.

　　Notes:

　　home-based working: working at home，在家辦公

　　a large proportion of my time: 我的大部分時間

　　undertake my duties: 旅行我的(工作)職責

　　拓展閱讀：名師點評網友BEC初級作文

　　本期作文題目：

　　Formulate a smoking policy for your office which is fair to both smokers and nonsmokers. Write a 40-50 word memo informing all staff of the policy.

　　提示：

　　我們需要確定，如果我是公司職員，我要在這篇memo中獲得什么信息?是不是要知道：

　　1.新的吸煙政策從什么時候開始;

　　2.吸煙區劃定在什么地方?

　　網友作文一：

　　TO: All Employees

　　FROM: CEO, Willan Smith

　　SUBJECT: NEW SMOKING POLICY

　　For all the employees, especially smokers,[1] plz be aware that our company's new smoking policy has been formulated as follow: A main smoking area's going to be restricted before Next MONDAY[2], anyone is not allowed to smoker in non-smoking zone even in the washing room.[3]

　　Plz target the smoking and non-smoking area and stick to the company's new policy.[4]

　　Thx.

　　名師指導：

　　[1]去掉，抬頭已經寫過給所有的員工，所以直接從正文開始就行了，費這個事干什么?

　　[2]時間不確切，最好是 from next Monday. Before 這個期限是什么時候?如果不能給出確切信息，就不要說，還不如換成具體的吸煙區域更好: be restricted to the room next to the toilet.

　　[3]你經常在洗手間吸煙嗎?或者你們公司有這樣的同事?把這句話去掉。

　　[4]添加：to ensure that it is fair to all of you.

　　網友作文二：

　　To: All staff

　　From: Hope0068

　　Everybody know that smoking is dangerous for your health. And the The studies didn't just point to the ill effects of smoking on those who smoke--non-smokers, too. [1] Notice is hereby given that the smoking area is located in the special corner[2] of the first floor of this building. This come into force on[3] September 15th.

　　Thanks.

　　名師指導：

　　[1]Memo 的主要作用就是提醒同事們注意事項，這和吸煙有多有害不相干，去掉。改為：to assure working environment

　　[2]一般的公司都應該給個room

　　[3]from

　　網友作文三：

　　memorandum

　　to : all the staff

　　from : jeremy

　　subjuect : new somking policy

　　do you have a feeling that our office is surrounding by smog all the day, [1]so we will implemented a[2] new policy for somking ,from next week[3] ,we will open an area[4] for the smoking ,and other area is rescricting to smoke ,also there is a punishment when we find you smoke in these area [5]

　　thank you

　　名師指導：

　　[1]去掉來

　　[2]we will implement a

　　[3]Next Monday

　　[4]在哪里啊?

　　[5]關于懲罰，最好不提。

　　網友作文四：

　　to: All Staff

　　from: Susuan Wu

　　To creat a nonsmoking office room, we hope that smoking is forbidden in the work office from Sep.1st. Would you please enjoy your smoking in the Launch by closing the office door.

　　Thank you for your coperation.

　　名師指導：

　　整體很干脆，但是語氣比較客氣，而且沒有看出是公司新政策的實行啊!

　　網友作文五：

　　To: All staff

　　From: Sarah Buffay

　　As you all know, there is an increasing dispute about smoking in the office. Now we'd like to formulate a policy both fair to smokers and nonsmokers: The vacant room 408 will be opened as "Smoking Room" from tomorrow. All smokers may go there within the time limitation from 9:00a.m. to 4:00p.m. But smokers are not allowed to smoke outside this room.[1]

　　If you have any problems, please contact me. [2]

　　名師指導：

　　[1]去掉。

　　[2]這是信件的結尾，不是memo的，直接用 thank you 就可以。

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